The Poet

[Demon6]

First off... NO IM NOT EMO :upyours:

Second... Sometimes I get a wild inspiration to write a poem. So I do. I would like to know what this community thinks of it. All criticism welcome.

Blue sky above
So surreal, so perfect
Storm clouds gather
So threatening, so beautiful
Turbulence begins
So ominous, so chaotic
Winds blow
So strong, so empty
The tornado forms
So destructive, so necessary
Clouds disappear
Will what's left bloom and flourish, or be a wasteland for eternity? This is life.
So unavoidable, so unknown

Thanx!

[[W33T] JimmytehHand8]

Thats not bad. Normally I don't like poetry too much, but I'll make an exception here :D

[Demon6]

Haha ty

[Mad5cout]

Your poll has no 10...

[Vash]

You don't have a title. Isn't it bad luck to not have titles for pieces? But I don't know anything about poetry, so my opinion is moot. But I'll give you an 8. Nice job.

[KrystalStarWolf]

mm.. It's not too bad, I rather like it... I give it a 6.

[Demon6]

You don't have a title. Isn't it bad luck to not have titles for pieces? But I don't know anything about poetry, so my opinion is moot. But I'll give you an 8. Nice job.

It does have a title i just forgot it...

Life of a Storm

[Demon6]

Your poll has no 10...

Yeah a put a 10 in there but it didnt show up... :dunno:

[kippendrecht]

not that bad :thumbsup: 7

[bman65]

Soooooo.....

[Persephone]

i give it a 9! I like.

[Grim_Scythe]

emo

[zilong]

need.......meter................ :monkeedance2:

i like the idea behind it tho

[jason bourne]

not bad, not bad at all

could you make it longer? it seemed a bit short to me.